Age/Gender: 21, Male
Job: bum
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Flash Reviews: 4
Music Reviews: 3
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Latest Flash Reviews
yeah, it actually does need some work on grapics... you need to work on the art, shapes and sketches... and it wud be better if it was darker... i mean, the yellowis sky really didnt feel right... the sound was dragging, but it served its purpose... if you could, it would help if you'd find someting better... the poem was good... nice concept... but i didnt like te way you merged the "real" images wit te animated ones... it made the animation look... uh... worse, im sorry... but i loved the way you shifted scene to scene... the concept there, too, was good, but the presentation didnt give it justice... please, revise it... i really like te concept...
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thanks but the yellow sky is there because the air is polluted and it's day time :P and you use a lot of periods
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yeah... it indeed IS a nice ass... nice pictures and the hairy ass thing made laugh so hard... nice music, too... infact, i LOVE it... whats the title of that song? and who did it? there was no violence and interactivity in it... the style was... uh... alright... i mean, it WAS somewhat like a slideshow... but, man, those pictures are NICE... please give me information on the song you used...
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yeah... it kinda needs those fastforward, pause, rewind things... dunno... maybe on the other submissions you already have them, anyway... same review here as the one i made last time, not much on graphics and violence and interactivity... but that aint bad, coz the humor is great... hehe... oh, yeah... and the outro song is stil cool...
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Latest Audio Reviews
yup, i have a suggestion, try raising the volume on the heavy part... compared to te volume of te intro, it sounded too low... why sould you raise the volume? so it would sound as if te listener suddenly got kicked in the head... oh, and try using a heavier distortion for te rhythm... and palm mute, if you did mute the rhythm, im sorry, i didnt notice it... work on ur lead, too... in some parts, it was as if you slipped the pick or something... and, yeah, it does sound like onld metallica, and megadeth... but hey, thats good music, so CHEERS...
just keep getting better, ur good to begin with...
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yup, it truly is... noting to cange here, i suppose... two thumbs up:D
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Thank you very much for your feedback!
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i love te off-beat feel!!! i tink the melodies were too loud, kinda drowns out the rest... but, over all it's GOOD!!! yeah, no need to work on the bajo, if you turned it to a chord, it would be too crowded...
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