Score: 8

"dude, work on the recording"

submission: Melodic Metal

date: May 5, 2007

yup, i have a suggestion, try raising the volume on the heavy part... compared to te volume of te intro, it sounded too low... why sould you raise the volume? so it would sound as if te listener suddenly got kicked in the head... oh, and try using a heavier distortion for te rhythm... and palm mute, if you did mute the rhythm, im sorry, i didnt notice it... work on ur lead, too... in some parts, it was as if you slipped the pick or something... and, yeah, it does sound like onld metallica, and megadeth... but hey, thats good music, so CHEERS...

just keep getting better, ur good to begin with...

Score: 8

"indeed, it is catchy"

submission: Hooligan March

date: May 4, 2007

yup, it truly is... noting to cange here, i suppose... two thumbs up:D

Score: 9

"YEAH SYNCOPATED!!!"

submission: Zephyr (Ambience)

date: May 4, 2007

i love te off-beat feel!!! i tink the melodies were too loud, kinda drowns out the rest... but, over all it's GOOD!!! yeah, no need to work on the bajo, if you turned it to a chord, it would be too crowded...